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coiled

Become decadence
freewill devastated
by primal persuasions
invisible in coils
 

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  • PerfectImperfection
    January 22, 2008

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    A nice take on the image inspiration. Well worded! Take care!


  • HeavenScent4U
    January 21, 2008

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    I really liked this, especially your last line be well and be blessed
    Nice alliteration here


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    January 21, 2008
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    This is wondeful, good luck!


  • February Moon gold member
    January 21, 2008
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    Nicely done.


  • HeavenScent4U
    January 21, 2008
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    Good luck whoever you is ~shakes your hand~

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