Apple tree, cored with secrets
Bite ,
to see your dream.
Author notes
prompt: the picture
A contest entry
- Quickie by February Moon.
300 points, ended January 21, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is wonderful, for your
message of taking a bite out
of life is such a true one.
congratulations on the
silver trophy for it is well
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I like this you did a wonderful job with the prompt I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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Thankies to you!
ditto! good luck!
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This is different than what i did, great job and good luck!
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a little variety is always good
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Yes it is, your welcome and thank you!
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I love your poetry, I shall steal your muse whilst you sleep. 
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oooh nooooes!
don't do that! anything but tthhhaaaaaat!!
lol
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But I wants it.
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Awe. well if you steal it... i'll just be a disaster and no one will love me. I'll be shunned.
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I'll still love you.
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Well i suppose there will have to be a duel.
you win...you get my muse
I win... i keep my muse and i get all your hair scrunchies!!
p.s. thanks for silver:
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Mwaha. Fine.
But you'll also have to fight my cat for the scrunchies.
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oooow KITTY!
I'm a softy for those kitties.
No matter! the scrunchies will be MINE
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Beware, it bites.
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I bite harder
see all those teeth?
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You'll get a mouthful of fur.
It is also pure evil, you've never met my cat.
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I live for fur in the mouth.
your cat? my dog. She's the devil...but she thinks she's elvis...always cryin all the time. Maybe they should be the ones dueling for the scrunchies
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It's a deal.
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*shakes on it*
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They'll probably become friends and gang up on us.
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