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Lunch With You



to the linen
napkin

I kiss-

lipstick stains,
you left upon it

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prompt; Napkin

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    How beautifully romantic...you have it written in your heart, as so few do anymore.
    You always amaze me with your lovely words of how love should be.
    Great imagery and heartfelt flow...made me long for this feeling once more...
    Excellent!


  • Tam
    January 21, 2008
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    Mally...

    you romantic feller, you!!!
    melting hearts again?!!!
    well done, sir!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 21, 2008

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    great imagery - love the title - fits so well... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.