behold no more the garden fair,
for heaven’s grandeur’s spent.
Author notes
ten words. garden of eden, though i'm not religious.
A contest entry
- Quickie by February Moon.
300 points, ended January 21, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ah, excellent capture of the picture. Worthy of gold.
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congrats on gold
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very nicely done
best of luck. be well and be blessed
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Awesome Write. I haven't looked at the others yet but this is my favorite so far. LOL Great Take !!
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very nice.
I'm not religious either.
but i like the prompt
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This is stunning.
Love it.
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thank 'ee!
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Very nice, it describes the picture beautifully! Great job and good luck!
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