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eden.

behold no more the garden fair,
for heaven’s grandeur’s spent.

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ten words. garden of eden, though i'm not religious.

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  • just-an-amateur
    January 21, 2008
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    Ah, excellent capture of the picture. Worthy of gold.
    ~M~

  • EverxEnding silver member
    January 21, 2008
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    congrats on gold

  • HeavenScent4U
    January 21, 2008
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    very nicely done best of luck. be well and be blessed

  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 21, 2008

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    Awesome Write. I haven't looked at the others yet but this is my favorite so far. LOL Great Take !!

  • EverxEnding silver member
    January 21, 2008
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    very nice.
    I'm not religious either.
    but i like the prompt
    good luck!

  • February Moon gold member
    January 21, 2008
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    This is stunning.
    Love it.


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    January 21, 2008
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    Very nice, it describes the picture beautifully! Great job and good luck!
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