Swirling layers of
memory-making cloth
enlayed with
date of perfection
my wedding
Author notes
I'm not actually old enough to be married but this came to mind.
A contest entry
- one hour by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
An honest critique please, none of that nice crud, lol :)
Comments
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This is just lovely... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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