Through The Innocence of Love

My lips quivered with the sweetness of you,
Each touch, a precious blessings to my soul.
We roll, entwined within each other's abandon,
Born again and again, entranced in each holy moment.
I worship your tender words as they surround me,
Devoutly, you raise me up in adulation.
Letting the joy lap at my languid limbs,
As I tremble within Heaven's reach.
The beams of light break through in celebration,
Cleansed of the world's tribulations,

We are delivered, through the innocence of love.

A contest entry

making love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar. 400 points, ended January 23, 2008, 9 entries
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raggyann
April 3, 2008
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this is wonderful
i like it just like you wrote it no parts better than another
awsome poetry
callmekatiebug
January 29, 2008

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Wow, This is great! my favorite line is "Letting the joy lap at my languid limbs" that one caught my attention. Wonderful Write!
PrabhuDayal Khattar
January 23, 2008
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The beams of light break through in celebration,
Cleansed of the world's tribulations,

We are delivered, through the innocence of love.

Ah ..I do agree with the all delievries of your love..enchanting rather I should state your love is..well done...