Come on,
Don't frown.
I know you like
To think its funny.
I'm bleeding,
I'm dying,
How sad...
Ha ha ha ha!
You like it!
My bloodstained courpse
Kissing your hand!
I need your laugh!
How can you laugh
At someone elses death?
Isn't if funny?
I'm almost dead...
Ha ha ha ha!
Bleeding,Bleeding,
Painful,Painful.
Ha ha ha ha!
Bleeding,Bleeding,
Painful,Painful!
Ha ha ha ha!
Author notes
Retiring from poetry all together. This piece was meant to see how it will feel to be laughed at when I die.
Comments
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Wow and DO NOT RETIRE FROM POETRY. tehehe put my two cents in. I've had a similar thought before, and you should not have gotten rid of all your poetry on here. It doesn't matter if you don't have fifteen million fans or whatever. This sounds like it could be some morbid song. I liked the bloody corpse kissing your hand line.
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Very morbid, hope this isn't something people would do, don't find death funny personally,
well expressed, hope you don't really consider retiring.
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