I think of that night
So many years ago
When we two said
My darling I love you so
We sat beneath an old Oak tree
As the wind blew gently by
Looking up at stars so bright
And the moon was full up high
In our hands we gently held
The future of our life
You had asked me if I
Would be your loving wife
Oh how the beauty of your words
Just melted my heart away
I said yes, my darling I will
And I am still your wife today
Over the years our gentle love
Brought us through the many days
That weren't always so kind
But always gentle in it's way
A contest entry
- Gentle Winds by Summer Dawn.
360 points, ended February 8, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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i will judge this contest w/in the next 24 hours. just letting everyone know. take care.
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Now this is a poem that really speaks of
true love and the reality of it. How it
is sweet and romantic and as you say:
"Over the years our gentle love
Brought us through the many days
That weren't always so kind
But always gentle in it's way "
wonderful poem here!!!
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Thank you paullallady for your kind comment and for reading my poem.
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How very sweet!
You are so lucky to have the love of your life with you.
I pray true love would always find its way.
Such beautiful memories make life worth living.
Have a great life.
Take care and God bless.....
--Peru.
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Thank you Peru for your lovely comment and reading my poem.
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Very nice write
To speak of such love is truly a blessing indeed
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Thank you stories for your lovely comment.
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wonderfully done. the gentleness i was seeking has been engraved in your poem greatly. thank you for entering.
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