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She Gives Me Peace

Peace
Is the warm fuzzy feeling that curls around your heart
Purring it's content loud enough for your lover to hear
As she touches her silken lips to yours
And tousles your chlorine scented hair
Peace
Is knowing your loved even if you lose a swim meet.

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  • Purush
    January 21, 2008

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    Best of luck

    lips spell the syallables of love in sweet hours
    thank you for your nice entry to my contest
    best of luck


    • Oktobere Sahnge
      January 21, 2008
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      Thank you.
      I do enjoy those sweet quiet, (well sometimes quiet) hours you speak of...

      Sunshine on your head!

      Lysander


  • Blooming Poet
    January 21, 2008
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    Good poem about peace and love. Ii really like it, best of luck in the contest you entered.