Yet
I perhaps
haven’t someday So
Stopped you’ll many
Reaching under- ques-
for you, stand -tions
even what left un-
though it is -an- Oh
the I’ve giv- -swered; will
pain -en up un- you
kills, for you; -atten- not
I-- I at least -ded. end
miss you that’s what So here my
far too I hope. I wait. grief?
terribly.
I cry forget
begins to close. You won’t me
I know heart but
you can’t as your that I can
hear me to widen only hope. Was
right now seem I a fool to dream at
but I us only all? Was I
just want between deserving of
you to spaces the shame?
know, The
Perhaps
Perhaps
the truth is all the same.
I hold on to nothing
I wait here for you.
Author notes
This is supposed to be a hand. Read each finger first from left to right. Then read the palm from bottom left, to top center, to bottom right. Finish off with the wrist.
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! with Shape Poetry by Tam.
900 points, ended January 31, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - When To Let Go and When To Keep Trying by Kiryuuofloveandhate.
900 points, ended February 19, 2008, 28 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shape Poetry by warrior-eagle.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, what can I say?!
Amazing. Truly deserving of the trophies x
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Very clever. A worthy winner. Not as funny as my entry but still clever. I shall try and do a hand one showing someone giving the finger.
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haha good luck with that i'm sure it'll be hilarious to see!
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Thanks!
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Wow, what a creative poem. I love the set up of it!
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Thanks for entering my contest,
I loved this,
this poem truly moved me
i felt this poem,
i thought it was deep.
the title,the hand
reach out,
it all went together.
great work!
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thanks for your comment ^-^
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THAT IS REALLY COOL LOOKING!!!!!! I would never in a million year beable to do one of those. It's an spectacular piece and i hope it places i have alot more to read Good Luck!!!!
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I managed to work out how to read this before your author notes
I was proud, hehe... this really did blow my mind... it is so creative, so wonderfully written... you deserved the honorable mention, but I'm surprised this didn't go further... amazing penning
Keep writing
Polly -
hmmm...
I had a hard time reading this at first...then I regrouped after your author notes...
very well done indeed...
creative and artfully rendered!!
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me!
Blessings! Tammy
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Thank you ^-^, when i'm not writing poetry, i'm into drawing, so I thought a block image would be a little too tacky for my taste :0p. Although there's someone else in this competition- I think- that did a really good job of it.
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Woof, I should have read the notes before trying to figure that out. Madness, but rather splendid. I'm impressed that you shaded the thing with the words rather than just doing a block image.
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haha nice, thank you ^-^
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This is cool, I couldn't figure it out at first , but then it hit me, like a hand to the face.
I like it.
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