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The Green Man [with Darianna]

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An enigmatic face and form,

Close wrapped by leaves and vines.

All nature peering from within,

Creation here defined.

It seems all wisdom’s gathered there,

And merged within the two,

When nature and humanity

Co-mingle through and through.

Sir Gawain it was who wore the green

At Arthur’s table round,

And fought the mighty green knight too,

A tale that still astounds.

The green knight drawn from our green man,

G’wain’s sword did fell his head.

The green knight put it back in place

And challenged G’wain instead.

A part of Norse or Celtic lore,

Green-ringed foliate head.

Ancient sign of life’s’ renewal,

Made of stone . . . and dead.

A contradiction of a sort,

This pagan man of stone,

Carved on churches everywhere

As though their very own.

This much-carved face that speaks of life,

And creativity,

In nature and ‘midst mankind too,

Can speak to you and me.

And so the green head tells of life,

Renewal of the earth.

And couples touch that leaf-ringed face,

In hopes of giving birth.

So view that image posted here,

With hope and rev’rance too.

And touch that ancient Celtic face

To see what it can do.

Author notes

Another collaboration with Maureen - love to do them. She picked the picture theme to use here and it was a challenge but tons of fun. Her poem can be found here

http://allpoetry.com/poem/3830933

And the connection comes through the picture. If you look carefully, you'll note that the features of the face are actually a couple. See if you find it.

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  • lianonsidhe silver member
    April 5, 2008

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    This is so lyrical and earthy it could be turned into a folk song. Really enjoyed reading this.
    Favourite lines:

    'A contradiction of a sort,
    This pagan man of stone,
    Carved on churches everywhere
    As though their very own.'

    Isn't it funny that Christians often still refuse to put umberellas up in the house, or walk under a ladder?
    Thought provokingly good!


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    February 11, 2008

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    I'm so glad I picked this one. It would seem the two of you are a good team. I laughed when you mentioned this image in Christian achitecture, wasn't that the way!? A very lyrical poem of the Green Man.


    • Darianna
      February 12, 2008

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      I just loved this picture. Seemed so perfect for two people to write about. Dad did wonders with his write! Isn't he great?



      Dari xxx


  • Ishtar
    February 1, 2008

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    I'm so super jealous of how amazingly well you can write this form stuff.
    And with imagery and metaphors and lovely, lovely themes.

    You're gobsmacking insane and I love you! <3

    -Reni