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Danse Macabre

Angel of Death,
waltz with me
to symphonies of
destruction.

Elegance, poise
won't help you
escape the grasp
of mortality.

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Inspired by "Dark Angel" by zemotion @ deviantART.

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  • anaisnais
    February 5, 2008

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    Very dark, deaths door prominent it seems. Not sure the 'elegance poise wont help you' quite works in this picture though.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    January 21, 2008
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    Good write.


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    That first stanza is amazing and also the last 2 lines...it's a little dodgy in the middle though...line 6 to be precise. Overall, a good entry. Good luck in the judging. La x

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