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cadence

fingers trace the ivory keys--
the world awaits her air--
solemnly does rise to see
that world was never there.

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i fail at metre, rhyme, at prompts i dislike.

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  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    For a prompt you dislike, I find that this is one of the better entries here. Bravo! Good luck hun