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Do you Believe

Do you believe, in magical things
Wizards or leprecanes,
Do you believe in fantasy
Like ferries in the trees
Do you believe in earthly things
Tomorrow's and forever's
Where love will always live
and marriage last forever
Do you believe in an after life
Where god is everything
Do you believe in possibilities
and have dreams of a better life
Do you believe in the simple things
like the touch of a lover
or a long goodnight kiss
Do you believe do you believe

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  • fool no1
    May 18
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    I certainly do, and many thanks for reminding of that fact with this excellent write...mal

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    The poem has a sweet but firm affirmation.The imagery has clarity and the emotion was felt. I am delighted that astralshephered was so kind to take the time to revise it for you,she found every nuance and highlighted so that it is seen with all the lights on.
    The poem reminded me of a song by The Batchelors " I believe" if you have never heard it methinks you may enjoy it.


  • astralshepherd gold member
    January 21, 2008
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    I took the liberty to revise rather than make comment. hope that is ok

    Do you believe, in magical things
    Wizards or leprechauns,
    Do you believe in fantasy
    Like fairies in the trees
    Do you believe in earthly things
    Tomorrows and forevers
    Where love always lives
    and marriages last an eternity
    Do you believe in an after-life
    Where God is everything
    Do you believe in possibilities
    with dreams of a better life
    Do you believe in the simple things
    like the touch of a lover
    or a long goodnight kiss
    Do you believe do you believe

    blessings and best wishes, astralshepherd

    ~r.

  • Gods-Artgal
    January 21, 2008

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    This is a great poem. I like how you worded this poem. You are a great poet. I hope that I will get to know you more through your poetry.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Big Monkey Woman
    January 21, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful, heartfelt piece of poetry

    I especially enjoyed the stanzas:

    Do you believe in earthly things
    Tomorrow's and forever's

    and

    Do you believe in possibilities
    and have dreams of a better life
    Do you believe in the simple things
    like the touch of a lover
    or a long goodnight kiss
    Do you believe do you believe

    nice job

  • astralshepherd gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    Charlie, thank you so much for stopping by and viewing my poem, “The Preacher’s Song,” I appreciate your taking the time to view it.
    blessings and best wishes, astralshepherd

    ~r.

  • SilverButterfly gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    oh yes I believe...that God is love..that He created everthing that is in existence..even love!
    this is such a nice fresh read!

    SilverButterfly
    Mary

  • June-bug
    January 21, 2008

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    enjoyed

    Very soft and gentle write. I must admit..I do believe in it all the things that make life a thing to treasure while on the planet earth..and I believe in things I have not seen or experienced in my life. I believe there is so much more cause there is beauty in our dreams and beyond the things of the imagination. Wow makes my mind wonder even as I comment. Very lovely write and I really enjoyed the pleasure of reading it. Makes me smile. Great choice of backgrounds which make the words that much more magical. , almost for got this I to believe in love.

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