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Amour Embrace

The dark hazel pools in your eyes,
Show me everything I want to see,
As they glisten underneath the moonlight,
The portals that ignite the inner sanctum,
The deepest depths of my heart in our,
Amour embrace.

The soft pink valleys of your lips,
Whisper everything I want to know,
As they smile underneath the moonlight,
The portals that ignite the inner sanctum,
The deepest depths of my soul in our,
Amour embrace.

The brazen tan hill of your nose,
Exhales the spirit of everything I want to love,
As it breathes underneath the moonlight,
The portals that ignite the inner sanctum,
The deepest depths of my being in our,
Amour embrace.

The sensuous slopes of your ears,
Receives the message of everything I want to share,
As they listen underneath the moonlight,
The portals that ignite the inner sanctum,
The deepest depths of my life in our,
Amour embrace.

The soothing balm of your hands,
Heals the pains of everything in my past,
As they hold tight under the moonlight,
The portals that ignite the inner sanctum,
The deepest depths of my spirit in our,
Amour embrace.

--Dedicated to Britainny Port <3

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Dedicated to the love of my life <3

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  • SincerelyMegan
    March 4, 2008
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    Wonderful write.
    I like how you used "amour"
    in your poem. I love that word
    dearly.

    Good luck.


  • scream.n2.nite
    March 4, 2008

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    Sweet

    Awe, very lovely dedication to your love!! The piece was beautiful and I love the repeated "amour embrace". Thank you for entering my contest and I liked the flow of your poem.

    There is one lil' thing that got me at the very beginning however:
    "The dark hazel pools in your eyes,
    Show me everything I want to hear (should be see?)"

    Besides that, good work!! Thank you!!

    - - riah - -


  • Stormy Days
    January 28, 2008
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    this is very good


  • calidreamgurly
    January 21, 2008

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    :-D !!!!!!!

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