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An Awesome Afternoon

Applying aloe

  ashine and aglow

    attempting Alluring
      alone and Adoring
      amiss as an Afterthought
    adrift as an ascot
  asylum assumed
assurance Abloom!

Author notes

MassMan

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    January 31, 2008
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    Terrific

    So well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Kathryn Bowden
    January 28, 2008
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    wow, how did you do that??


  • TheAshtrayGirl
    January 28, 2008

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    :)

    Wow
    Loved it
    Short, sweet and smart
    Nice job

    Thanks for entering my contest
    &
    Goodluck

    Jaz <3


  • Anna Emkah
    January 22, 2008

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    An Attractive Attemp
    At Admirable Alliterative Art.
    Amazing!
    Anna


    • MassMan
      January 22, 2008
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      Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww,
      As an awesome Acquaintance always Appreciative acknowledging Authors,
      Am Affirmatively Appreciative!

      (M)a(ssM)a(n) ----(h)aa-(h)aa!


      • Anna Emkah
        January 22, 2008
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        Hahahaha.....

        Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

        Very funny! Anna.


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    Creative vocabulary, A - based poem! I'll have to give you an A+ on this one dear Brother.

    Dennis


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    January 21, 2008

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    Wowza

    Now that was alot of A words LOL! I got to admt you have written quite a unique poem and also really like the way you just let it flow and created quite a beauty of a poem. any ways this is a very well written profounded poem and I enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work n good luck

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