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the first day of the rest of my life

on the first day of my life I smiled.
when the sun shines,
maybe I can greet the day with
happiness and be thrilled.
I'm so a l i v e you wouldn't
even recognize me.
maybe the days
    just suck sometimes.
maybe the nights
    are lonely and cold,
but with you by my side
      I am whole.

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Fixing Tomorrow

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  • Kathryn Bowden
    January 28, 2008
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    short and sweet, but yet you say so much.


  • TheAshtrayGirl
    January 22, 2008
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    :)

    Short and sweet
    Very cute poem
    Thankyou for entering my contest
    &
    Good luck

    Jaz <3


  • Purush
    January 21, 2008
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    BEST OF LUCK

    oh! a lovely entry
    thank you
    best of luck


  • Purush
    January 21, 2008
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    BEST OF LUCK

    oh! a lovely entry
    thank you
    best of luc