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Mamaw's Jeans

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Mamaw likes to wear her jeans everyday


She says she never knows when she will want to play


She likes to play in her garden of roses and shrubs


She plants and she weeds and kills all the grubs


She buys shovels and rakes shes always on the guard


For landscaping changes to make in her yard


She's whip smart with her comments if you laugh at her jeans


She calls them her comfort zone keeps her looking mean


Her tom-boyish personality is both sexy and cool


Her flirtatious ways would make any man drool


Her garage is an oasis with tractor and supplies


Her reflection is a bit muddled in the tools that she buys


Mamaw in her jeans, that's her direction in life


She has powerful charm and causes very little strife

 

 

 

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  • condor gold member
    November 20
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    Congratulations on your bronze trophy and thanks for this most wonderful read. I like this little story that tells us about Mamaw and her life in her garden and shed. I don't think I could wear anything else but jeans and really smiled picturing her bustling away in her lovely garden. great tribute and excellent rhythm and rhyme.


  • black-phenoqu
    October 30
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    this goes better with the other contest you entered it in

    but it is still good


  • Danna Hobart
    February 6, 2008
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    I hope that Mamaw enjoyed her poem. This is a lovely gift to her. Thank you for entering.


  • pantress silver member
    January 27, 2008

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    bravo

    I loved this, This reminds me, of me. Every last bit of it, from the tractor to the tools. Fabulous write. I'm sure to read this one often.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    Blue jeans shown not
    as a fashion statement
    but as a way of life!

    Bravo! A great piece.

    Aesthete


  • arafura gold member
    January 21, 2008
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    Well done Mamaw! Where would we be without jeans? Good luck in the contest!

    • amysticwriter silver member
      January 22, 2008
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      I have always loved wearing jeans, was raised with 4 brothers...A real tomboy...

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