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Goodbye (Cinquain)

Goodbye
Please do not cry
There's no need for sorrow
You will find new love tomorrow
Hello.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 3, 2008
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    wow! this is very intresting =)
    loved reading it!
    good luck in the contest
    stephanie


  • Darianna
    January 21, 2008
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    A cinquain! I haven't tried one of these yet I don't believe! This is a rather quaint form isn't it?

    I'm not really sure on how to take this...the person speaking sounds so cheerful to me. I don't know why. But I do like how it's left on a positive. The message is simple and true to life also.

    Thankyou for entering my contest, good luck!

    Dari xxx