Naked

silenced, muffled,

these are what my secrets are to you

hidden, covered,

mysterious is what you call me

I have no plans to reveal to you

what I'm keeping in my soul,

you must find out yourself

by looking for clues in Poetry -

my muse when it's naked.

Author notes

Picture Credit: Poetry by =Bark

did this come out okay?

A contest entry

naked by le soir. 675 points, ended March 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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February Moon
January 26, 2008

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"Did this come out okay?" This came out better than okay! This came out beautifully.
Starz of Heaven
January 21, 2008

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This is very good sweety thank you for shairng this with me and goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love always
aboomer
January 21, 2008
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wow, this is really good!
good luck in your contest.
Heavenly Angel
January 21, 2008

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This is excellent, sweetie
Your wording is just beautiful!
Wishing you all the very best in this contest!
x-Black-Butterfly-x
January 21, 2008

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wow sis this is just amazing and so powerfully penned with deep and delicate words. well done andbest of luck