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The Rise Of Dracula



I wandered lonely streets

in search of blood divine.
My blood lust rushing,

through veins of ancient times.


I'm the darkest vampire

that lurks in frightened minds.
Four hundred years or more,

locked in my sacred shrine.

Ten thousand worshipers

have brought me back to life.
Young virgin’s blood now served,

her final sacrifice.


On ancient bones blood dripped,

feeding my darkened soul.

I can feel the rush of blood

and the flesh begins to grow.

My forgotten youth returns,

I’ve regained all of my might.
Now I stand before you,

and transfix you with my eyes.


I am Count Dracula there's

no escaping from my hold.

When darkness comes at night,

I will quickly take control.

To all those worshipers

who are standing in front of me.
I shall give you eternal life,

and immortals you all shall be.


But it comes with a price,

when the sun rises in the sky.

You must all be dwelling in coffins,

or you will surely die.

Now it is time for me to fly,

and find my long lost bride.
Four hundred years have past,

my blood lust flows inside.


Through darkened skies I fly,

searching the streets below.
Now I see my newest queen

and my fangs begin to grow.

Look deep into my eyes

and swim this lover’s trance.
I will soon conquer you

with these extending fangs.


I can smell your blood explode,

as I quickly sink them in.

Into the sweetest neck, I suck,

filling myself to the brim.

Taking this mortals life

I will watch her darkness grow.
I have to bleed her dry,

suck the goodness from her soul.


When the darkness calls again,

she will rise up from the grave.
Then she will feast with me,

on mortals who will be our prey.

Rest now my darling queen,

let this elixir flow deep inside.
For you will soon rise again

and be standing next to my side.

 

I am Count Dracula

the darkest soul of them all.

and you shall now all obey me

or you shall surely fall.

 

 

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  • Darkwell
    April 7

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    WOW i could really feel the power of Dracula surging in this poem. a lovely tale of the Vampyre. Dracula was alot more fun in the 17th century, nowadays all he does is sit up at night reading anne rice novels and watching HBO its like we cant even get him out on the town since they came up with the True Blood show . great rhythm and rhyme, high marks.


  • ennovy silver member
    March 17
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    Dark & Scarey

    wow the Count is here and hungry as ever....thank you for entering our contest....novy & brazos


  • ShiningNShadows
    December 10, 2008
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    This is very good. I really like it. Good job. Good luck and thanks for entering!


  • upperworld06
    November 2, 2008

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    Taking this mortals life
    I will watch her darkness grow.
    I have to bleed her dry,
    suck the goodness from her soul.
    Awesome. good flow, good rhyme except for the 3rd to last stanza, other than that it was great, loved the story too. good job and good luck


  • RunningFromReality
    September 30, 2008

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    Wow. I really like this! Flowed nicely, and rhyme wasn't too bad, either. I've never read anything with Count Dracula, so this was a first for me. ^^ Thanks for entering, and good luck!

  • know one
    August 11, 2008
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    The form and flow is great in this poem and I like the way you discribed it,thanks for entering.


  • hazeleyedfreak
    August 1, 2008

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    Phenominal

    I love this! Its beyond any of the words I could choose. Wonderful Job!! Thank you for entering and Good Luck!!


  • The Cookie Monster
    May 12, 2008

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    FINALLY! Someone who wrote a structured poem... I really like the rhythm, the flow, the theme- obviously I like the theme, to base my contest on it.
    I wish you luck in the contest!


  • BittersweetPhantasm
    April 5, 2008

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    this is a very good poem about the Blood Count in all his glory, it captures the classical vampire image very well. it has wonderful imagery.
    i can't quite get into my head what it would sound like put to music, but it is a wonderful write.
    thank you and good luck


  • XpushXmeXagainX
    March 22, 2008

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    "I am Count Dracula there's
    no escaping from my hold."

    I don't really like the flow of that, but other than that this poem was amazing. And if I believed in vampyrism, you'd totally have me convinced. :] Nice write, and thanks for entering


  • Selene Tremere
    March 18, 2008

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    wow! nice point of view...I liked this
    thank you for entering and best of luck


  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 8, 2008

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    dark....well written...but...Idk...its not really what I think of when I think vampires....but seriously..you just captured Count Dracula in all his animosity.


  • scream.n2.nite
    March 8, 2008

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    tasty

    I loved this- wonderful piece of work. This has to be one of my favorite poems ever read of Dracula- you pulled it off very well! The rhyme scheme was great and the plot was constent. I truly enjoyed this!!! ^_^

    - - riah - -


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    March 3, 2008

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    ooh this is really good,
    i like it alot,
    i usually despice anythign to do with dracula,
    but this is good poetry, very good,
    good luck in the contest,
    love vamp xxx


  • Count Orlok
    February 10, 2008

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    Dracula was a personal friend of mine. A very important vampire in the hierarchy. We often hunted together in the old days.


  • N e a r
    January 28, 2008
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    Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck!

    Marluxia

  • N e a r
    January 28, 2008

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    "I can smell your blood explode"
    I love this line especially because it's just awesome in description.

    Your whole poem is nicely structured and organized. Rhyme seems forced in places.Beat's decent and topic is played out well.


    • Timespell
      January 30, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting on this one.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • ForgottenFairytale
    January 24, 2008
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    Love the graphic way you describe everything!!! I'm a big vamp freak! so yea!! This is art!!!

    • Timespell
      January 24, 2008
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      Thanks for reading this one.

      Vampires, well Dracula has always fascinated me since an early age. So I like to do the occasional write on the subject. Glad you liked it.

      All the best,



      ~T.S~


  • Brian12
    January 21, 2008

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    OMG DUDE U ROCK!!! YO I LOVE THIS ONE, AND IMMA BIGG VAMP FREAK...I THINK IMMORTALITY, FANGS AND HYT LIKE THAT IS COOL...SEE THIS IS WHY YOUR ON MY FAVS LIST

    • Timespell
      January 22, 2008
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      Thanks Brian...

      The amount of vampire films I've seen over the years, always makes me want to write about them.

      Thanks for reading.

      All the best,



      ~T.S~


  • completely mad
    January 21, 2008
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    great Vampire write....vampires are the sexiest creatures of them all...


    • Timespell
      January 22, 2008
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      Thanks...

      Always fun writing about Vampires.

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      All the best,



      ~T.S~


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    January 21, 2008
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    Woooooow! This is really good, I mean I know I said good but wow!

    • Timespell
      January 21, 2008
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      HEHEHE... Thanks.

      I thought it was about time I wrote another Vampire poem. I do like a good bit blood sucking poetry, so I came up with this one.

      Thanks again for reading and commenting.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

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