bye is an ordinary word
used to end the day
goodbye is an extraordinary word
used to end and yet to begin again
A contest entry
- Simplicity of Goodbye by Darianna.
800 points, ended February 8, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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haha i like this alot, it is very true, and it was a greta [leasure to read. continue this lovely work =)
good luck in the contest
stephanie =) -
The sentiment in this is thoughtful and neatly developed in just a few words but it is so important - particularly in such a short and exposed poem - to get spelling right. Same mistake twice "ordanary" should read "ordinary" and "extraordanary" ditto "extraordinary"
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So true. There's a quote which reads:
"Every good-bye makes the next hello closer"
Anonymous
I thought your poem expressed this nicely.
Thankyou for entering my contest, Good luck!
Dari xxx
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