After I watched
you walk away,
I hung tomorrow's dreams
on the tree of yesterday.
A contest entry
- Simplicity of Goodbye by Darianna.
800 points, ended February 8, 2008, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
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superb
i identitfy as I m the bir sitting on that tree....not able to fly .unless tree brewks ........I need human gesture.......a heliping hand for shelter ...then need to fly.........my God of course comforted me..i m at peace at his foot -
Excellent!
Such a powerful statement in so few words. Beautifully poetic! Loved it! Julie.
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lovely poem. =)
great pic with it as well.
love the errie presentation and ligering of words.
good luck in the contest =)
stephanie -
This is simple and haunting. A great combination in my opinion.
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haunting
"I hung tomorrow's dreams on the tree of yesterday.."
deeply poetic and sad ...inspires love...
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This is so heart-breakingly sad and very relatable. I love how simple it is yet how vast the emotions are that it creates with it's words. You've really thought about it and have encompassed the nature of the final goodbye between two who used to be one. I really like this a lot!
Thankyou for entering my contest! Good luck!
Dari xxx -
excellent
THis was just what I needed. THanks!
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