I quietly creep across the land
I wish to see the full moon grand
and past the trees there I see
the moon light rays washing over me
there is no way it can be described
tis' too wonderful this inspiring sight
I feel my soul drinking in the light
my heart's in love with the glorious night
the moon gleams magically
the transparent rays reaching out
forcing away the gathering clouds
no one knows what the mystery's about
but I feel no more longing
for I am complete
there is no sadness
the moon cannot defeat.
Author notes
This is a true, heartfelt piece. There is nothing that can describe a full moon. Hehehe, I just love it!
Option 3.
A contest entry
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I feel my soul drinking in the light
my heart's in love with the glorious night
there is no sadness
the moon cannot defeat
So inspiring. Great write, and you used the rhyme well as well !All the best in the contest -
HOODWINKED!
A beautiful, thoughtful poem about the majestic moon in full blossom. There is a special feeling that the moon gives that the harsh sun could never replace. A feeling of contentment and peace is a natural consequence of basking in the moons delightful rays.
Well written poem, thanks for sharing.
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Dennis
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i love moonlight, it keeps me from running into walls at night
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lol, cool, no one ever seems to think of practical reasons for liking the moon.
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THIS IS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!
I too love the evening with the moon shining and the night animals voices calling from the dark.
It is indeed very beautiful and serene.
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Very beautiful piece, I agree, a full moon is amazing, and in the desert, it looks so huge sometimes like you can just grab it out of the sky.
beautiful poem, i enjoyed!
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