Just been dumped.
cursing this world,
went to a coffee shop.
ordered a cup.
She gave me this..
This world's not a bad place!!
Author notes
twenty four words
one winner - one gold - 2400 points
(closes when i find my winner)
and you better make it good ~ only finished pieces
A contest entry
- twenty four by le soir.
2400 points, ended March 13, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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aw curte
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it's not is it?
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thanks a lot for appreciating this piece
and yeah..this world's not a bad place at all !!
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