Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Breathing you in...

Missing image

Late at night, when darkness wakes me
in my dreams, I stretch out for you…
The memory of what we share
runs through my veins…

I feel your hands grasping my hips,
as if we have to enter each other,
never wanting to leave…


Your breathing beneath my ear excites me,
and a warm rush over my skin is taking me somewhere else
A place where deep love becomes passion,
and words are no longer needed…
Only we are there…
Two bodies’ tumbling,

hungry to feel,
with nothing else in sight
Breathing each other in and out…

Late at night, when I am alone,
and darkness wakes me in my dreams,
I stretch out for you…
grasping everything that reminds me…

Breathing in your smell
and everything you give…




Author notes

"Penguins"

I found myself a nice quiet spot, relaxed a bit and let my mind wander while I listend to my favorite song by Tryad, this is what I came up with...
"Lonely is the night "

A contest entry

Words are no longer needed...

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 42 of 42

  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    October 27

    Edit | Reply
    This was a very well written piece that you have written here. I enjoyed reading this. It was good. Thank you for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 24

    Edit | Reply
    Beautifully spoken with a touch of the sensual, thank you and good luck in my contest, Josie


    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      August 27
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you so much for the opportunity to earn a trophy again

      XXJeannette


  • Sweet-Sins
    August 15

    Edit | Reply
    this is really nice- the beginning tho is a bit raunchy- but i liked it. gr8 write
    x


  • BlindingLove
    August 10

    Edit | Reply

    The imagery really impressed me!

    Though short, this poem had alot of feeling, and emotion packed into it
    good luck on the contest!

    xoxo
    xxScarletBeautyxx


  • PhoenixFaith
    June 12

    Edit | Reply
    Wow very vivid imagery you have here. The picture is really neat as well.

    Best of luck and thanks for entering
    Kate


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    May 21
    Edit | Reply
    i often find myself doing the same thing. this is very intoxicating and corporeal. how spellbound i found myself as i carefully read each word. loved it. thanks for entering and good luck.


    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      June 3
      Edit | Reply

      THANK YOU

      Thank you so much for the Silver

      I'm glad you enjoyed this poem

      XXJeannette

      • Mistress Leala silver member
        June 3

        Edit | Reply
        You are quite welcome. Thank you for gracing me with such creativity and stunning work. Hope to read more of yours.


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    November 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Sretching out foryou inmy dreams, I feel you still. These are't your exact words but the feeling of him
    still remains vivid for she has not forgotten him...Congrats on the silver

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for your beautifully etched entry, Josie


  • motel silver member
    March 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this poem reminds me so much of the poetry of Ono no Komachi ... not the form but the feel and depth. thanks.

  • Nighttime angel
    February 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this is absolutely beautiful, I love this. excellent job on this. Congratulations on the silver trophy.

    good luck in the other contests as well

    kat


  • LanguishedLad
    February 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Beautiful

    I loved this and no wonder you won a silver trophy with this piece it is magnificant.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Ohh.... This is sensational!!!
    I really like the sensual beauty Love it and congrats on the shiney silver. Well deserved.


    Delila


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    February 8, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Heaven of a poem!

    Loved the rich beauty in this poem.
    You wrote this so lusciously and smart.
    The flow was built really well to capture us with
    beauty, grace, and passion of this moment.
    WELL DONE poet, very well done!
    May you be blessed by your quiet writing place more
    often! so very lovely.
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen


  • songstress80
    February 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    breathtaking

    this poem is very breathtaking...it made me miss my fiance even more and want him even more because what you have written is basically how i feel every night when he can't be with me...we don't live together yet and he lives a bit of a distance from me and i miss him terribly...i also sleep better when he's around...even though this poem made me miss him more and think of him more, it's still a good thing...wonderful wonderful wonderful write....excellent!!! very beautiful!


  • requiempoet gold member
    February 6, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    oh the dirty wonderful things that I find!! You have a great imagination. Many clappy guys to you!

    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      February 6, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thnxs sweetie

      The mind can create many things don't you agree???
      And real life becomes better because of that...


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this is such a powerful and poetic piece it captures alot and it holds a deeper meaning in your words well done


  • mentalseductionz
    February 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    thankz

    for the rate of my comment that simply complimented a GREAT written poem!

  • mentalseductionz
    February 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    no longer breathe..

    closed or opened eyes day dreaming...no longer breathe
    let me in to learn the deeper meaning.......
    LOVELY write....


  • Great Cthulhu
    February 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I enjoyed the repetition of the first stanza. It brought almost a reverie or memory full circle to wakefulness. Great imagery. Wonderful write!


  • ravensgift
    February 1, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Gorgeous and sensual with a hint of sadness. Loved it!


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    February 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    OKay... WoW
    Can we say sensual, what a read this is.
    This is just down right perfect writing.
    Amazing job... Love the picture.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    joyce


  • Brazos silver member
    February 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Very sensual, and very visual. I toss and turn in bed often, and half dream the exact feelings you have expressed here. If you can't have your lover there with you, at least you can dream of them, and smell them, and feel their hands upon you.

    Well done,
    Brazos


  • Cynthia
    February 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Excellent

    WOWIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Wolf, this is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry.
    Well done.
    Best of luck to you in both contests.
    Keep up with the great work.
    Keep on penning.
    Thank you so very much for sharing.


  • Stardust100
    January 31, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Brilliant and the pic is fantastic


  • sunny day
    January 31, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    WOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!

    This one is amazing. So soft and sensual I floated through it as though I were in an erotic dream. Your words so tastefully penned had the most beautiful imagery and it is still in my mind's eye. I could feel my heart racing as I read each line. It leaves one longing to doze and find that dream again, only to wake up and find that it is real and he is there. Absolutely fantastic and I wish you the very best in the contests. It sounds golden to me. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    January 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    hey how come i missed this one??????
    this is fantastic!!! so warm and sensual!
    best of luck!

    Tasha


  • Beating gold member
    January 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Wow! This piece is just so good, and so incredibly sensual. And you're right, words are no longer needed when you're just the two of you. Very well written, and truly beautiful! I love it!

  • Warrior7
    January 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is a very passionate piece Jeannette, i enjoyed every word written, the imagery was superb and gave me a sense of relaxation and peace. Thankyou for sharing. Goodluck in the contest

  • dillpickle62
    January 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Ew....Hot!

    I was chilly here in Maine today. But no longer. Ew!
    The only thing I would probably do is drop the s on ears.
    It is hard for a lover to breath against both.
    Wow though what a smoken poem! hahaha...I gottah go run outside for a bit now. Sorry it took so long to get back.
    Excellent writing my poetic pal.


  • Synonymous
    January 24, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    this is amazing....i can relate


  • Hecate616
    January 23, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    beautiful!

    best of luck!


  • catz Moderators member
    January 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is well worth waiting for !! Now we know what was in your head waitng to get out
    A very good poem, and thank you for entering this sensual, well written piece.
    Good luck in the contest

    Dee


  • Ephiphany
    January 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Stunning and very passionate sis, loved it and it looks great

    Me♥

  • catz Moderators member
    January 22, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    On the other hand, since this isn't a limited entry contest, it really doesn't matter about reserved spots so go ahead and leave it in... and I've eliminated that rule from the contest.
    Dee


    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      January 23, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you Dee I think the picture is there to find my muse

      I think it's on its way already...
      XXJeannette


  • catz Moderators member
    January 22, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Ummm... the contest rules state no reservations. That's a nice picture tho

  • Warrior7
    January 21, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    where's the poem?

1 - 42 of 42