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Abuse

I survived to tell some truthful tales
athough my life been hard has nails

I  have cried tears in many pails.

When I was nine a friend of mine

crossed well  between the line's.

 

 

He  stole my virginity

he left me with no dignity.

For now he's passed away

I will never grieve for him

because what he did was

a terrible sin.

 

 

 Abuse of any nature is a crime

against humanity

report it to  keep your sanity.

 

Author notes

3.Abuse This is a true story about my step father which continued through my childhood and this only came out about 7 years ago when i first started my writing although this is hard to live with I will never forgive nor forget.however i have children of my own now .the past does not equal the future and we all have to accept things the way they are otherwise what is the point of carrying the anger and hurt around
3) Write about being sexually abused/raped whatever you want..

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 19, 2008
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    I agree with you nobody should do this kind of thing to another and I don't blame you for not weeping over his grave. I also know that often people wont see it as abuse when a young person is abused by another young person, as they see it as well, just 'minors' behaving 'inappropriately'.


  • FallenFromGrace1102
    April 4, 2008

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    great write so strong keep up the awsome job. i wish you the best of luck in my contest thank you for adding something.

    *~*bee*~*


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    awesome poem,
    I hope it didn't really happen to you.
    It is so very sad that these kind of things happen to anyone. This is a strong piece full of emotions.
    You pulled it off well.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 7, 2008
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    The content of this poem was dealt with well, and the ending was well constructed... there are a few places that I think could do with some revision: such as 'athough my life been hard has nails' maybe should be something like 'although my life's been hard as nails'... with some revision this poem could be even more powerful well done

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • BloodmoonFox
    February 28, 2008

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    thumps up

    nice work it was amasone how u put so much thought in to it but mad it short..it takes alot for me to do that lol nice work keep it up and it coming;P

  • Amanda 88
    January 31, 2008

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    this was a great poem!! you did a great and wonderful job. This was also a great expressed poem!! kepe up the good work!!! have a great day!


  • stompsalot
    January 30, 2008
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    well expressed piece! Keep on writing.
    blessings and *stomps


  • Kathryn Bowden
    January 28, 2008
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    well written, I touched a nerve in me because I can relate.


  • TexasMomma
    January 25, 2008

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    nicely written and very heart felt...I commend you for sharing your story with us...I know all too well it takes a lot of courage to do so! Keep up the good work!


  • Jade-
    January 21, 2008

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    Very good

    Hey,

    Great poem. It flowed so nicely, and is short and sweet. You're right, abuse is a crime and the more people speak out about it the better.

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!!

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