Searching
Sorting out
My soul
[my crazy crazy soul]
Drowning in
Misled faiths
Droning out
Messy feelings
[crazy crazy feelings]
But in the end
I’m caught up
Counting coins
And feeling change
[crazy crazy life]
Breathing
Scented mem’ries
Feeling
Happy for a while
Singing to a crazy
Rock & Roll song-
[crazy crazy night]
But I sleep, happy
Knowing I tried to
Live out my
Crazy crazy life.
Author notes
OPTION 7
A contest entry
- [x] Lots of options [x] Something for everyone! Read! by Jade-.
450 points, ended January 28, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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yes!
this is exactly the kind of pick-up I need. With everything that has been going on, I felt like my life was the only crazy, crazy one. Guess there's others too.
Towards the end, maybe I should have told myself what you did. Atleast I tried to live out my life.
with a little bit of help. You know what I mean. 
Keep penning dear and hope to see loads of smiles from you. Till then, here's a little help. 
love,
Aparna
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...crazy life but it's cool, i like the poem!!!...nice!
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A light and fun sort of write. A little abstract, in a great way - sorting emotions. LOVE this line:
"Counting coins
And feeling change"
that just worked so well there, truly poignant. Nice write!
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crazy poem... but not bad
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Great!
Hey,
This is a very good poem. I really love the choice of words on this. It made it uniquie :-] It had a nice rhytm and a nice simple format. Good job.
Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck!
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This is great work checkmate I would love to do a collab with you soon
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hey I can't IM at work lol it's banned so I am replying to myself on your poem lmao I'm great hope you are good
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