Desireable Delusions
Raging Recklessly
Unlikely Unscathed
Naturally Negligent
Kirsch Kissed
Author notes
Kirsch is a cherry flavored brandy...in case you were wondering
Written November 13th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Alcohol by thehittmann.
300 points, ended March 19, 2004, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is really a good one....I like the word usage..
The presentation is great too...sorta looks like you feel when you are drunk..or how you sometimes see..lol...
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Nice little acrostic / alliteration poem. It's great how all of these words explain an aspect of being drunk. It's a little short to make a great impact but I guess you get that when drunk only has five letters. Best of luck in the contest loopy. -thehittmann
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Oh, that was really cool. Not only did you have a double acrostic, you also made it alliterate. ALLITERATION RULES! And I think that the way you bring it together, all the words are really powerful, and I can remember spending night delusional, letting the bottle drown the problems, and knowing that I would not leave unscathed, that in the morning it would all come back. Really excellent poem.
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You go girly~Acrostic on~Woot woot~
~ Love it and the pic too~Wow~ I feel a little tipsy 
~Very creative sweetie~Enjoyed this very much~Keep them coming~Look forward to more~Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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Humerous
I like this one, having spent many recent nights Kirsh kissed. -
hehe - don't i know all about this... hehe - my 20'th today... guess what i did? i got drunk... yay for me. i had a sorta tame one though, no need to go overboard, i need to play cricket tomorrow and i can still barely walk... stoopid torn ligaments in ankle... who needs em anyway??? hehe - can u tell that im stil not quite sobre yet? i got home from the pub about an hour ago... other point i got to make... gotta love australia - legal drinking age of 21... go me...
cheers. great write... sums me up so well.. sometimes hehe.
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this is short but well written, i like this one alot...
God Bless,
Tammy -
Thankyou
They're a lot of fun to do...me thinks
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Yummy acrostic
You're really good at these
Take care,
Karen
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