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El

my daughter is not foreign
in the same way but wanted by that middle name

with pronoun of me,
her identity when I introduced us





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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    "my daughter is not foreign
    in the same way..."


    i really like those lines, nice entry here, thanks


    al


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 1, 2008

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    Well penned fine poet. Deep with metaphoric imagery and profound in language use and poetic device... Best wishes to you in this contest... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

  • wendymolly
    January 21, 2008
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    Man, I am seeing some of the best thoughts with imagery in this contest!