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Blue Barbecue

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Oh swing low

my cherry ooo

I done got the blues

in the toes of my shoes

and I gotta be a movin’

with that back beat groovin’

 

Play me tune and make it squeal

in sizzles of fatback and cornmeal

and feed my soul

on that blue pork roll

rockin’ in the arms

of my sweet baby’s charms

 

 

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  • MuddyKing
    January 26, 2008

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    you know I loves this one....damn
    this is blues
    and now I'm hungry
    Rob says Mr. Johnson is itchin'
    John Lee says YOU YOU YOU

    peace and hugs
    Muddy


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 25, 2008
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    cleverly done Bravo. I like. Love, lane


  • just rob gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    Low 'n' slow

    tha's the way.
    with twelve hour shoulders
    to pull 'n' a dobro
    slidin' 'round
    a summer evenin' like
    good strong arms
    'round a bad woman

    yeah, I'm there


    I loved this, but Robert Johnson {the tattoo}
    is itchin' on my ribs.



  • Presence
    January 21, 2008

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    What! No one has commented on this illustrious work yet!!????!!!

    Looky here! This is one fine poem! Spare ribs a crack'n upon thy pearly whites, and fixens abound! Blues?? Again? Already? Hoommm.

    How empty I felt before the blue pork roll came around! How stingingly deficient!

    Now you have come to find me here with sauce upon my chin hairs... ripe with the wide eyed wonder of one who as overdosed upon fatback. Sink the Bismark!

    More pie over here!

    I hope all these deep profundity words has been a helpin you to cheer up a bit. Mygosh! I hope you get over that foot fungus thingy! Deep blue y'say?


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