I may not be the tallest man,
But I'll lift your spirits to a sublime level,
I may not be the handsomest man,
But together we'd make the best-looking couple,
I may not be the strongest man,
But I'd brush aside mountains to be with you,
I may not be the sexiest man,
But there's no end to the pleasures I'd bring to you.
And in this world, this universe, cocoon,
We'd sail with abandon, singing high praises
To the Provider who, at last, allowed us
To meet again, and be this pair,
To finally meet again, and be this unstoppable pair,
At least until the earth revolves around the moon.
Author notes
Yep, just trying to get the sappy out of my system. Enjoy anyway. Then rinse and repeat.
Thanks!
- El Gio
Written November 13th, 2003
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nice
Nice. Sappy it was, but nice. -
Lovely, lovely dear- I was floating until the last line, and then BOOM a little bomb there, lol. Very candid and sweet- feels like it's unmasked and hopeful.
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Do I smell romance in the air?
LOL
*smiles*
I do enjoy short pieces like this!
where small bits of conversations runs through one's mind!
Keep penning on my friend!
Bill -
Very good
Very nicely done...although I am not much of a fan of love poems, this one is relatively enjoyable. Nothing to find fault in the structure, flow, or language....just don't care much for the subject. Still, you've done a good piece of work here. Thanks for sharing.
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ooh... this is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CHWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
Its is chu adorable
sorry for the childish behavior but its is sooo cute... I didnt know u had a gf 
Oh well! I am glad that i know now ^_^
Great write
And very true write
Keep it up
Love
Maleen
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