How I remember...

Laughter,

the simple joy you bring.

The Creative style uniquely yours.

Love,

it curls around my lips

a smile when you are around.

Yes, I remember.

The Terror

and crusty dryness

I've suffered since you've

BEEN GONE!

Please baby, come home, I miss you.

Lost and lonely,

Stranded.

Author notes

Quote from Contest Holder Desire "One entry which had me rolling...
which I wanted to give a Trophy too...
the only hiccup...

over 7Lines...

*How I Remember*...
Magnificent entry and one which I felt was a Brilliant work of art...
The only thing was the line count...
14Lines instead of required 7...
I was saddened to not award because of that and it is one requirement I do adhere
too...it must be 7Lines...no more and no less~~~ So Sorry...
I imagine the Poet would understand
that I must follow my own rules set...
(my past contests...I have never awarded)

in the future I will be having a Pre-Write contest and would love to see that piece entered...I thoroughly enjoyed the verse! "

Ha teach me not to pay attention to all the darn rules..

A contest entry

- Let Your Inner Voice Be Heard - by Desire. 700 points, ended January 29, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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NomDePlume
February 28, 2008
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I love it!
Awsome Cat!
two sides of a beatiful heart...

Prayers
Michael
Watuwant
February 28, 2008
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I can't get past the picture! lol
Besides that, a nicely penned little piece, Cat.
djc
- Catressa
  March 7, 2008
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  lmao.. Thanks.. I thought it was sooo funny myself..
faderman1959
February 24, 2008
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What a wonderfully witty way with words! It had it all!
SeptemberFaith
February 9, 2008

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Cat.. this is classic. The first part of the poem is a true to the heart love poem, the second half, made me giggle. Leave it to you to bring laughter to what could have otherwise been a tear jerker. Your beauty shines through and through.

Criss
arafura
January 21, 2008

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Yes like ardentMarch I love those lines!

"Love
it curls around my lips
a smile when you are around."

Lovely! Good luck in the contest!
tara wilson
January 21, 2008
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"Love,
it curls around my lips
a smile when you are around."

that is so beautiful..

the second portion of the poem shows the funner/comical side of the love you have together - relationships need both..this is something that is probably always on your mind.
leo2
January 21, 2008
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Your comment brought back a flood of precious memories. It's always good to sit back and reflect on what things have gotten me to this point. I hope you and your family are doing well. May health, happiness and prosperity find their way into your home this year.

Sincerely,
Leo Long