You settle
for anyone
who blows a kiss,
scatters petals
Your love is shallow
waiting round
ready to pounce
on any chance
of love
or affection.
I have to mention
You are
beautiful and
I wish
that you could see
you're worth
a thousand stars
to me
My friend.
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything To Do With Love, Good or Bad by Blooming Poet.
385 points, ended February 12, 2008, 73 entries
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Comments
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I like this. I don't think it's lame - on the contrary, it's a good take on the Beautiful, and the way they seem to need to be fed with adoration.
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those shallow lovers normally end up charming you into pain and despair, so be careful. I 've been hurt by shallow people many times before.
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Well, if your on a writer's block, you arent doing too bad my friend. I like the rythm to it, I could see as though someone thinking this as it looks as if they are staring off into space, just thinking about someone. The thought that you conveyed is one of the worst...for I know, as to many others too. I hope everything works out, and I hope she realizes... peace out.
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