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I

Snapping blaze
echoes
the words of
identity penultimate

Writ in fire

From a tree unconsumed
by flame comes forth
the one and only Name

I Am Who I Am

Barefoot shepherd
wretched man
tool in the Almighty's hand
bends low

One question
spinning off the edges
of his mind

Straightening he whispers
to the sky:
If God declares with certainty
I Am
The question I must ask myself is
Am I? Who Am I?

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