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[ Clock ticking ]

Clock ticking
Chariot turn to pumpkin
Dress caught in the handle
Shoe broken
Standing before prince charming
Soul bare naked

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My thoughts driving me insane... like I need help in that department

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 21, 2008

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    i don't think this was the Disney version of that story, but i like it better without the singing mice, keep it flowing


  • Lady Altheia
    January 20, 2008

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    Very nice. I hope your Prince Charming can see the real you even after a horrible night when happily ever after doesn't happen the way you plan.