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[ Drilling machine ]

Drilling machine
Holes in the wall
A peak through
No light is found

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 21, 2008

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    to escape from one prison into another, did i get it right, lol, i like these poems of yours my friend, keep it flowing


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    January 20, 2008
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    If you drill holes in a wall wouldn't it show light? I hope you find your light on the other side.