Sitting here, thinking of "You"
Wanting more,
I will be begging soon
I see you, there
I want you...now
I don't want to be just another face in the crowd
Let me be your inspiration,
Don't let our hearts be separated
Baby please,
Let me be more then just another memory
Won't you come back to me?
Soon,
Remember me...forever
Even if I am just another girl, another memory
Don't never regret not having another
I will always be your lover......
Author notes
written: 1-20-08
A contest entry
- You have COMPLETE CREATIVE FREEDOM!!!!!!!! by Twosoulsasone.
465 points, ended January 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ahhhhhh......im sure there are many people that consider me just another memory. It is amazing that you can spend a cetain amount of time with someone only to one day not be with them anymore. I know this feeling and i know exactly what you are feeling. Great write.
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We all touch each other's lives for a reason..you are not just another memory...never believe that..we all take something with us that other's have taught us...even if you never know..you have left him with something special..this is a sad and wistful kind of write..just the kind I love..the pouring out of the soul's cries..always helps heal and grow...thanx so much for sharing ...my sweet daughter..best of luck in the contest..love ya..
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A very nice piece of poetry. Well written and a pleasure to read. You did a great job. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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