The rose of love is filled with thorns.
Thats almost imposible to get by.
Some times a cut hurts so much it will make you want to cry.
One mistake and the blood will spill.
Leaving you empty inside.
But if you get past the cuts and the bruises.
Past the wins and the losses.
Than the beauty of that rose you'll see.
And that love is truly ment to be.
Author notes
I’m 25 or under
A contest entry
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Comments
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Thoughtfully written...
Thank you for your profound Valentine's Day entry in my contest!! 
I'm wishing you all the best!! Peace, xx Cyn 
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hmm..
I liked this but a little harsh for a love poem -
yeah for sure.
i hope everything stays well.
peace.
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losses and meant...before I forget.
This was a great write. Sad and then not to sad. I liked how it turned out.
Kelli
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