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[ Love lost ]

Love lost
To hopeful future
Never once thought
Love won’t find its way
Back at home

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 21, 2008

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    i know this one, you know you should write for fortune cookies, these short poems are ten times better then what they give you, keep it flowing and your not done, you can't be done, my mind need to work out more, i am starting to feel the burn, feel the burn