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[ Embossed etching ]

Embossed etching
Around wooden frame
Within is captured
Perfect moment
With a crack in the middle

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okay, I think I'm slowing down

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 21, 2008

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    lol, i have read the others ones before this one, you are not slowing down, lol, i like this poem, keep it flowing


  • Kelli Marie
    January 20, 2008

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    A great piece of poetry. Well written and a pleasure to read. You did a great job. Keep it up.
    Kelli