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[ Violins playing ]

Violins playing
Electric chords shrieking
Fire blazing
Toasting to metallic death
With last saved breath

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I can't stop it, help me

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 21, 2008

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    These are great maybe you can tie them all together someday and make a poem lol Keep them up Sis.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 21, 2008

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    nope, i like these poems they are helping my mind wander around, i haven't let it out in a while it needs the work out, keep it flowing


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    January 20, 2008
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    let the mind wander and let it all come out. Poetry is theraputic. Keep writing.