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[ Unborn seed ]

Unborn seed
Bleeding inside
Lifeless skeleton
Mother’s emotions
Go undefined

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Dang, this weird mind just won't quit

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 21, 2008

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    this one makes me think about so many things, that i can't even begin to just express them, or not feel from them. keep it flowing


  • Kelli Marie
    January 20, 2008

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    This reminds me of a miscarriage...how sad a reminder. Very well written though. You have left it open to many interpretations.
    Kelli