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[ Fingers melting ]

Fingers melting
Holding to hour glass
No trace of sand
Life looks from far
Beyond my reach

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thinking too much

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  • XxBlack ivoryxX
    January 23, 2008
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    nice

    It was sweet and simple


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 21, 2008

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    this is pure gold my friend, do you mind if i used one of these in a story i am working on, keep it flowing