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Your Eyes

I looked into your Eyes,
Wow are they peaceful,
I almost started to cry,
They were so graceful,
I really didn't even try,
I could see beyond the hue,
They were saying so much,
If you only knew,
I couldn't believe they'd do such,
How ever they're sky blue,
How could this be,
Its beyond ordinary,
Why can't everyone see,
Its beyond extraordinary,
I could see you destiny,
I could see contentment, epiphany,
I was totally in enchantment,
I could see curiosity,
even some generosity,
They had a lot of inspiration,
I had so much anticipation,
Our hearts full of temptation
and mostly they had compassion.

What do you see?

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 28, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    This reads to me like a Mother or Father holding their newborn child for the first time.

    Beautifully penned

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    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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