You make me feel things i have never felt before
Your touch and embrace takes me to places i have never been,
constantly wanting to explore and find out so much more!
Just looking into your eyes, makes me buckle at the knees
and to hear your voice.. puts me at such ease.
To hear your beating heart is like listening to heavenly music
I can tell you every mood by the sound of your breath
and that sexy look in your eyes, so mysterious and mystic.
But there is just one little thing that i can not live without
the one thing that has been constant throughout.
... Your love and devotion,
the tenderness and your caring heart,
that's so strong, just like a love potion.
Author notes
Needs a lot of work i know, and the ending is incomplete but i would appreciate feedback!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh this is a beautiful piece! The first 2 stanzas really stuck out to me because I think I'm falling for someone. It's very well written
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It is so wonderful when we find someone that makes us fel this way. This was a pleasure to read. So heartfelt and full of caring. Take care, Sandy
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