Passing through thick trees with fading light,
This brush of passing wind comes forth on wings.
Spreading this likeness of heart and soul on sight,
Rosy cheeks and butterfly pulse this all brings.
This feeling surpasses all I have felt.
Your words came softly melting away pain,
Giving me joys and pleasure to be dealt.
All coldness gone from heart and warmth is gained.
Darkness vanquished, your light as my guide.
I find your voice soft as a lullaby,
Your face carved by angels always in mind.
Time fades away, I wish to never say good-bye.
Two souls and hearts in love will collide,
Together forever, always by your side.
Author notes
This a sonnet of mine following abab cdcd efef gg form like the kind the Shakespeare used a lot and it is about love
A contest entry
- 3 options by CharlotteRose.
450 points, ended February 17, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Nicely done, fellow poet. I truely must learn to write a sonnet!
Thank you for entering your beautiful piece. Excellent word choice amd touching phrases; a love poem at its best. 
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This is beautiful and tender and so
descriptive. The rythem and flow
is wonderful and is a very touching
read.
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I think you did a great job with this. Beautifully written with a loving pen. Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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beautiful...though..needs lil work
great scene... not greally a good turn... the sonnet if i get right is an iambic pentameter...which some does not follow...some of it's trochaic...but it's overall beautiful...comment mine if you will...like my sonnet firing desire
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What a beautiful sonnet. I have never written a sonnet before. This is truly gorgeous. I enjoyed this very much.
Kelli
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