I want to love you
Really I do
So it seems though
I don’t love you anymore
All I want is for you to walk out that door
I want to kiss you
Really I do
But I can’t go on
Kissing unpassionate lips
And holding unswaying hips
I want to miss you
Really I do
But I don’t anymore
Even though I try
Over you I will never cry
Author notes
I am trying to telll myself I am better off wiithout him, it hasn't been working too well.
A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 9 Feelings by cricketjeff.
1500 points, ended January 29, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark! Love! Hate! Pen it! by darkhawk.
300 points, ended June 11, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Love is a great gift that can easily be replaced, perhaps that's why no one should grow attached? I loved this piece, another great write from Poetic Grace.
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Thank you for your poem in our contest, sorry you had such a rough time.
Please join us in the last contest in our series. You may enter two poems, but they must both be new writes, pre-writes will be DQ'd.
We look forward to reading more of your work.
Sue and Jeff
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awesome
i really like this poem
good job !!!!!!!!!
-XoX-Alth3a
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Its good to know someone can symphathize with me. I feel like shit about my situation.
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This is a hard place to be in. When you know the season is gone and you know the time has come to an end, but you hate to be the first one to say good bye. A wonderful write. Very nice. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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