I don't need anyone
I can only depend on me
It's men like you
that makes it hard for a
woman to trust and believe.
i fooled around with you
and the worst thing possible has happen
I may be pregnant by you.
And you're telling me you want me to kill it
and you'll pay for it,
but it's not you that has
to go through the pain
It's me!
And to think I liked you
and thought that you cared.
I don't know why I'm crying
as I'm writing this today,
but right now at this moment
I HATE YOU! no matter what I say.
I gave in to you and was open with you
about my past relationships
I TOLD YOU THE TRUTH,
but ha! I got played like a fool.
You took my body for a ride
and now I may be carrying your child
what a nice surprise.
Surprise is that you have a girl
and i really don't care
because you entered my world
scraming my name.
You're a BITCH in my book
you ain't nothing but another lame.
Y'all may think I'm stupid for not using any protection,
but people are entitle to one mistake
and this was mine
I regret the day I let you hit it from behind.
You ain't nothing but a little BOY trapped in a grown MAN'S body
I hope one day
you won't get as far as you started.
I don't need anyone
I'm all on my own
I'm a big girl now
this ain't the first time I had to be strong.
Author notes
option 5
A contest entry
- I know we've all been here at some point or another care to share with me? by Beverlynohime.
450 points, ended January 27, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Lets just say I agree with 99% of what you've wrote here, especially about the heartbreaking truth about men and how they can't be trusted.
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Quite the vent here... well done
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What a Vent!
The emotion just jumps out of the words you say and hits so hard. This depicts such an inner strength which makes it beautiful and rough all at the same time.
There are some spelling and grammar errors in it which is why I did not choose it as a winner. However, I think it is an excellent write with its raw emotion. -
hey just 2 let u kno u not alone n i am here if u ever need me 2. ik we been thru alot but parts of me still wants u.
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I really love this! It's sad but so raw with emotions! I love it! I can relate...somewhat because my friend my best friend's mom's dad wanted to abort him...but I'm really glad he didn't get the chance...because I would be lost with out him.
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