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Something I can't Say

The computer screen turns black
And then starts back
like a mirror image of who I am
I let my heart fade away
Only to come back another day
But when I reach I never can grip your hand

I wish I could say I love you
I don't know why I can't say it truthfully
At moments I love you
But some times your just a friend
I don't know if I can ever decide this
Because I don't love you
But your more then a friends bliss
So why is your hand still far away

I wish there was something more then a friend
But still less then the word love
I'm staring into a cloudless sky
Just thinking of
Why does the world keep on spinning
Why is it not everyone is always winning
Why is it that I can't say I love you
because I do
Is that why I can't just say
That I love you

Author notes

I love you so much but I just can't say it I don't know why but I do know
That I love you

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  • only1love4ever
    February 11, 2008

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    Wow I have had this feeling before. When your with someone and you know deep inside how you truly feel, but you just cant let those words escape your mouth, you hold them in your mind, repeating over and over again, and when you say good bye, you so much want to say them, but instead you only say goodnight. When they say it the first time, you get so scared inside, everything just screams out to say it, just say it already, but you cant, and you dont, and you run away so far far away inside, and its hard and you just dont know what to do, and then when you least expect it, you do, you say it, you tell them that you love them!! So I do see what you mean, I know exactly what you mean and this is a great poem, both inside and out!!


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    January 26, 2008

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    oh my gez i loved it
    i so liked this poem i understand in a way
    great work keep it up and good luck